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Redline for RubyStone11

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Hi ;u; This is a redline of :iconrubystone11:'s picture [link] I flipped it over to work on it so that's why her signature and date is backwards.

I love how you drew her face but there are just a couple proportion and composition things that I want to hit on.

    -You tend to stretch out the legs on your characters and that's cool if that's what you're looking for :')

      -If that's not what you're looking for, to fix that: A good rule of thumb is that the length of the torso, from the top of the head to the genitalia area, should also be the length of the legs.
      -Also the knee should be about the half way point in the leg

    -Your arms also are a bit too long and bending them while leaning doesn't seem very stable.
      -Another good rule is that the elbow is level with the bottom of the rib cage and the wrist is level with the bottom of the genitalia area.

    -Don't forget about wrinkles! :D
    -I also didn't see her other arm? So I didn't know what you were going for with that (I just stuck it next to the first one)
    -Also make sure that her head is centered over her feet (or in this case her foot and the cane) so that she won't fall over :D

    -Compositionally there are a couple things that you could change but really aren't all that important
      -First off don't hide all of that wonderful rose vine! Wrap it around some more and show off those beautiful thorns!
      -Just a preference thing here, but putting things that stick out right behind one's rump could be mistaken for a tail or something so I just moved the leaves down a bit
      -To fill up some more of that blank space I made her hair flow forward. This would also show off more of those cool colors in her hair.
      -To balance the image a little more, you could also make the rose a tad bit bigger to take up some more room.


If you have any questions please feel free to ask! :D
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CyanOnigiri's avatar
urghhthg waffle, why is your anatomy so pro?! :iconnanakosadplz: