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Hi ;u; This is a redline of 's picture [link] I flipped it over to work on it so that's why her signature and date is backwards.
I love how you drew her face but there are just a couple proportion and composition things that I want to hit on.
If you have any questions please feel free to ask!
I love how you drew her face but there are just a couple proportion and composition things that I want to hit on.
- -You tend to stretch out the legs on your characters and that's cool if that's what you're looking for :')
-If that's not what you're looking for, to fix that: A good rule of thumb is that the length of the torso, from the top of the head to the genitalia area, should also be the length of the legs.
-Also the knee should be about the half way point in the leg
-Your arms also are a bit too long and bending them while leaning doesn't seem very stable.
- -Another good rule is that the elbow is level with the bottom of the rib cage and the wrist is level with the bottom of the genitalia area.
-Don't forget about wrinkles!
-I also didn't see her other arm? So I didn't know what you were going for with that (I just stuck it next to the first one)
-Also make sure that her head is centered over her feet (or in this case her foot and the cane) so that she won't fall over
-Compositionally there are a couple things that you could change but really aren't all that important
- -First off don't hide all of that wonderful rose vine! Wrap it around some more and show off those beautiful thorns!
-Just a preference thing here, but putting things that stick out right behind one's rump could be mistaken for a tail or something so I just moved the leaves down a bit
-To fill up some more of that blank space I made her hair flow forward. This would also show off more of those cool colors in her hair.
-To balance the image a little more, you could also make the rose a tad bit bigger to take up some more room.
If you have any questions please feel free to ask!
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